Suggestions not to destroy language (Corrections)

Original story
It is a little story about a girl, her name is Mary and she likes really to read novels and she imagine that she was the protagonist.

The majority of her friends were thinking that she lived out of reality.
Many novels that she read were very interesting and romantic but when she was reading these she felt very excited.

So, both her family and her friends respect her ideas and feelings.

Sometimes when she felt bad she choose to read and she found a time to relax and distract of her problems.

Corrections

It is a little story about a girl, her name is Mary.

Mary it’s a girl who loves read novels, so she always imagine that she is the protagonist in the story, because of this the majority of her friends think that she lives outside of reality.

Many novels that Mary reads are very interesting and romantic, so when she was reading those novels, she felt very excited. But at the end both her family and her friends respect her ideas and her feelings.

Sometimes when she feels bad, she chose read one of her favorite’s novels, so she tried to found some time to relax and distract of her problems.